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– November 2, 2011
This story describes an improbable but exciting adventure. It takes place in Israel in 1966 where four twelve year old Orthodox Israeli boys foil a dastardly plot to destroy Tel Aviv. At the outset, they find, restore and launch a boat that initially belonged to some of Israel’s first settlers. In doing so, they come in contact with an Arab fishing boat and an Arab submarine crew from Egypt that are working together to launch a bomb. The plot involves the way in which they thwart this plot and save the city. While the plot itself may be somewhat intriguing, and the book’s black and white drawings try for a whimsical feel to enhance the story, there are some negatives. Most importantly, the book is poorly translated from Hebrew to English. For example, the conversations are stilted and sound nothing like the words that young boys would actually say. (“You and your philosophizing!” Yanky complained. “I hope you are aware that you’re testing my patience, but never fear. I was blessed with a large dose of patience.”) Additionally, the character development is clearly lacking and many Hebrew phrases are included but are not explained. Arabs are stereotypes: the name of their terrorist operation is “Operation Tellafif ’s a Goner” due to their difficulty in pronouncing the letter “v”. The published review copy also included inexplicable changing print size every few pages. Ages 10 – 13.
Marge Kaplan is a retired English as a Second Language teacher. She is a consultant for the children’s literature group for the Roseville, MN school system and is a storyteller of Jewish tales.