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– August 31, 2011
Meet Ella Miller, a 36-year-old archaeologist with a six-year-old son and a husband she believes is tyrannical and no longer loves. Deciding to leave him is easy; it’s the difficult aftermath that surprises her. Unable to stand on her own, she quickly takes up with another man — a sensitive psychologist whom she helps coax to leave his family— but finds fault with him too.
She garners sympathy but only for so long. Soon, Ella, with her self-serving run-on sentences and lack of concern for everyone around her, becomes a bore. Shrill and whiny, she reverts to the self-centered child of dysfunctional parents before our eyes. She counts on her new lover to thrill her “with the promise of the fulfillment of that ancient yearning for the knight in shining armor who will rescue me from the incisors of this couple between whose teeth I was gnashed, wandering from mouth to mouth, it’s a we that no longer includes them, only me and him…” The book’s page count doesn’t help Ella’s plight. Sentences that last for paragraphs give her more time to alienate her lover — and her readers; the book would be a more enjoyable read minus a couple hundred pages.
There is no question that author Zeruya Shalev is a master of beautiful powers of description and possesses an incredible mind. A voice creaks “as though it hasn’t been used in years” and singing is hesitant “like a prayer with no hope of being answered.” Whether or not she intends for Ella to serve as a sympathetic heroine, Shalev has documented in fiction a haunting account of the heartbreak of divorce that rings true.
She garners sympathy but only for so long. Soon, Ella, with her self-serving run-on sentences and lack of concern for everyone around her, becomes a bore. Shrill and whiny, she reverts to the self-centered child of dysfunctional parents before our eyes. She counts on her new lover to thrill her “with the promise of the fulfillment of that ancient yearning for the knight in shining armor who will rescue me from the incisors of this couple between whose teeth I was gnashed, wandering from mouth to mouth, it’s a we that no longer includes them, only me and him…” The book’s page count doesn’t help Ella’s plight. Sentences that last for paragraphs give her more time to alienate her lover — and her readers; the book would be a more enjoyable read minus a couple hundred pages.
There is no question that author Zeruya Shalev is a master of beautiful powers of description and possesses an incredible mind. A voice creaks “as though it hasn’t been used in years” and singing is hesitant “like a prayer with no hope of being answered.” Whether or not she intends for Ella to serve as a sympathetic heroine, Shalev has documented in fiction a haunting account of the heartbreak of divorce that rings true.
Jaclyn Trop is a Los Angeles-based freelance reporter.