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– August 24, 2011
The essential problem with Sex, Drugs & Gefilte Fish, a selection of stories adapted from the Heeb Magazine Storytelling Collection, is that much of its content loses its tang in the transition from the stage to the page. Admittedly, many of the anecdotes are fun— in the sense that they describe outrageous, humiliating, or exhilarating events — yet they read like what they are: spoken-word pieces that never quite metamorphosed into fullfledged short stories. Perhaps when performed, with tone of voice and facial expressions to carry them, they might hit the mark. But as short stories in a book, these arrows fall well short of the target.
Even the entries in “Sex” that feel complete aren’t necessarily good: Many fail to fulfill the basic principles of short story writing, whether through underdeveloped characters or imprecise narrative arcs. Several feel like vague sketches and one ends with an unforgivable cliché. That said, some of the best pieces are truly charming, skillfully composed, and genuinely funny. A few are poignant, a few truly original, and for a Jew (or Gentile) looking for a quick chuckle, these few are a joy to read.
Even the entries in “Sex” that feel complete aren’t necessarily good: Many fail to fulfill the basic principles of short story writing, whether through underdeveloped characters or imprecise narrative arcs. Several feel like vague sketches and one ends with an unforgivable cliché. That said, some of the best pieces are truly charming, skillfully composed, and genuinely funny. A few are poignant, a few truly original, and for a Jew (or Gentile) looking for a quick chuckle, these few are a joy to read.
Joshua Daniel Edwin was born into a family of incurably compulsive readers in Baltimore, MD. He now lives in Brooklyn, and is a student in Columbia University’s MFA program in Creative Writing.